Oamaru Creek

Yesterday we went to Omaru Creek so we could write a story. Mr Marks told us to bring the cameras so we took pictures and came back to school and did a brainstorm about the pictures. I was walking around looking for something to take a picture off.

After that I went and  asked Bailee "what are you taking a picture off ?"and he said "I'm taking a picture of the bridge". So I went to get the camera off Paige. and I went and took a picture of the bridge and Hiwarau was in my picture. The bridge is so old and it fells liked I was going to fall in to the creek. After that we went back to school. When we got back to school we went into class Mr Marks said to our team that we had to brainstorm about the bridge. Collins said the bridge was old and mouldy water goes under the bridge.

 The bridge is made of wood and the wood  is old and mouldy there is scrues. Water from the Creek goes under the bridge there is oxygen weed beside  the bridge.

                                                                     

Sione's Story

This morning we went to the assembly we sang a song about sport balls and enactment.
we are not allowed to take them home.
and if you don't take it back you are not allow to get a ball again.
Mr Burt said someone was trying to put a ball in the tree and after school they can come back and take it home and play with it end of the story.