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Tuesday 19 February 2013

Oamaru Creek

Yesterday we went to Omaru Creek so we could write a story. Mr Marks told us to bring the cameras so we took pictures and came back to school and did a brainstorm about the pictures. I was walking around looking for something to take a picture off.

After that I went and  asked Bailee "what are you taking a picture off ?"and he said "I'm taking a picture of the bridge". So I went to get the camera off Paige. and I went and took a picture of the bridge and Hiwarau was in my picture. The bridge is so old and it fells liked I was going to fall in to the creek. After that we went back to school. When we got back to school we went into class Mr Marks said to our team that we had to brainstorm about the bridge. Collins said the bridge was old and mouldy water goes under the bridge.


 The bridge is made of wood and the wood  is old and mouldy there is scrues. Water from the Creek goes under the bridge there is oxygen weed beside  the bridge.


                                                                     

1 comment:

Mr Chris Marks said...

Great work today Sione. You have some editing you need to do so go outside and read it aloud and you will notice some changes to make.

Your next challenge is to describe the bridge.

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