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Speckles on a pear looks like freckles.  

On the outside skin, speckles on a pear  looks like freckles.  

Mr Burt,who loves kids, takes assemblies on Friday.

Mr Burt takes assemblies, for all the kids who comes,  on Friday.

Lots of people, from all around the world comes to visit, Auckland city in new Zealand.