Adding detail to sentence

                                                 

Adding Detail To Sentences

A complex sentence has more than one clause. It has added detail giving the reader more information. It adds interest and makes writing JUICY.

You can add to the

beginning

middle

end

of simple sentences.

 

Mr Jacobsen was our coach on the confidence course.

When we went to camp Mr Jacobsen was our coach on the confidence course.

Mr Jacobsen who helps us is our  coach on the confidence course.

                                             

                               

Mr Jacobsen was our coach on the confidence course When we went to camp .

When we heard that we we're doing sailing  I was nervous about sailing on camp.

I was  nervous as we went by the sailing boats for sailing on camp.

           

I was nervous about sailing on camp because it was my first time .

When we finished sailing  we went abseiling.

we went on this challenging obstacle which was called abseiling.

we went abseiling When it was nice and sunny .